BO
Beth O’Connor
@beth210

Active 2mo ago Joined 20 Aug 2024

Wholebeing Energy Coaching - Course/Perspective

I've been working on series of workshops. I've presented one of them a couple times, but the rest are new (focus, explore, amplify, create in bold below are the names of each workshop).  I've been trying to tease out the language regarding the workshops and was also thinking about our perspective from last Tuesday,  and this is where I've landed. 

  • Energy is the keystone, the current to everything you do

  • Your wholebeing is required to live your courageous life - soul, heart, body & mind

  • The Wh…



JC

Hey Beth, it seems like you're looking for general feedback?

I'll admit to being fairly unknowledgeable about these concepts and this sector ... but the language reads perfectly clear to me. From what's there, I didn't have any confusion.

The only place my mind hiccuped as I read was that I read 'current' in the wrong context at first (ie: present vs electric charge) but that was quickly remedied as I continued reading.

I guess my next likely questions would be: when, how much, and long long?

Hope this is what you were looking for—cheers!

BO

@Joel Carter Thanks! Yes, I was looking for general feedback on language. And you're right the next part would be the details of the course - date, time, cost, but that's easier to write as it's factual vs trying to succintly describe the courses. I appreciate the comment re "current", as well. Thanks again!