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Myriam C.
@myriamc

As a filmmaker, I create videos for culture/heritage professionals, artists and entrepreneurs who want to reveal their know-how while staying authentic.

Through our work together, you’ll finally be able to communicate easily about your expertise, mission, and identity. A sincere film leaves a lasting…

Active 1mo ago Joined 9 Dec 2024 Lyon (GMT+01:00) Paris
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Feb 15 07:59am in MetaHelm Activators

The Aligned Path - Offering

https://docs.google.com/doc...

This is the latest version of my newest offering (beta version), and before I send it out I would love to have some comments on what I can improve! I am repositioning myself away from so much trauma therapy into an arena that is more aligned with my mission. This offering would be the first step. 

Thanks!

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Myriam C.

Hi Jole,

I find that the presentation of your offer is very clear and very attractive. However, I have a small comment or suggestion on the offer itself if you don't mind.

I felt totally transported while reading the different parts of your coaching offer, it sounds really great and will help many people.

But I felt like a slight disappointment when I reached the last stage where I would be "walking away with my personalized guide". I immediately thought to myself “from then on I'd be alone, and that's precisely when I would be needing help to implement what I've learned" .

If you offer like a monthly feedback or accountability session maybe it would be good to specify this?

In french we have this saying "Il y a plus qu'à" which is my own personal nightmare. It means "Now that you know what you should be doing, all that's left to do is act on it"  But that's the hardest part !

I don't know if it's helpful but as I identify with the way you describe your clients, I thought that might give you some insight.

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